NyQuil

Starting last Thursday I woke up with a really bad sore throat, and stopped up sinuses. I was miserable all day long and it seemed like that was the day I was getting most annoyed by everything or everyone. Later that evening I went to the gas station and all they had was Dayquil in tablet form adn i wanted liquid so i just decided to get Nyquil since they had that in liquid. So on the way beack home in the car I just opened the bottle and took a huge swig of the medicine...I realized it probably wasnt the nest thimng to do but i was felling so bad I didn't even really care and within like 15mins I was soooo drowsy I could barely stay awake, but also all my symptoms were gone besides the nasaly voice I had from my stopped up sinuses. So all was well for the rest of that day and the whole weekend and now I feel fine... that stuff works miracles.

Phenom

So they other day I decided to get a psychic readingmy curiosity of the whole subject. Suprisly after the reading I know longer doubt the whole idea of that part of soceity because they knew information about the questions I had asked them way before I even thought about telling them it and had no previous knowledge of me or my particular issue. Their reading I have realized in the past couple days has given me confidence on the question I asked them I no longer really doubt myself and my thoughts and future decisions I plan on making on the issue

Titles

Diversity: The Melting Pot

Exclusion: A Life Away from Home

Squeege, Jotio, and Tu Padre

Meniscus

Unfortunately my sophomore year of High School during Rugby season I tore my meniscus making a cut on the turf. Even though injured I stupidly continued to play on it the rest of the game and did mot notify my coach or trainer. When the game was over my knee swelled up to an immense size and it locked up. That night I just iced it and the swelling went down and my full range of motion was returned and so it went the whole season I played it swelled and locked up and i iced i did not want to miss the season. So next year roles around its my junior year.. again i played until one day after practiced the icing method no longer worked and it swelled u p so much and was so painful I missed the next day of school. Regretfully I had to tell the coach and I was not able to finidsh the season my junior year. Now senior year has come and over the summer I went to the Orthopedic surgeon finally and got an MRI and i have a tear on the right lateral side of my meniscus and arthroscopic surgery is neccessary. So over winter break this year I will be getting the surgery and I will be on Crutches for approximately three weeks and no activity that involves strain on my knee is allowed for six months after that so. It sucks but I will be missing my senior year and last year of rugby:( , but at least my knee is getting fixed.....right?

Narrative Passage

I was able to form life-long relationships and intergrate myslef into a asociety that was very distince to mince. In addtion, this accomplishment shows that I do not easily back down from a challenge. I was able to attend High School away from home,over a thousand miles away. Even when I knew no one and felt homesick I was able to follow through and continue only for my benefit. This accomplishment thus shows that I can accept a challenge and surpass those adversities that lie in my path. This accomplishment may have taken away many of my comforts such as living with my family and living with people that I was used to, it showed and related to me as it represents who I am and what it is that I want in life.

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Naptime-

I remember everyday in first grade we used to have naptime for like an hour. Most of the time i did not sleep nor did most of the other kids. We justed laid there an joked around and just blankly stared, but it was probably some of the best times i had in school as a little kid. Especially when we "woke up" we got to have milk and a snack. The teacher would always select two kids to go and pick up the two crates of milk from the cafeteria one was just normal and the other was chocolate. Every kid used to want to go and you were really lucky if you were chosen even if you had done it before everytime was like your first. Those naptimes were the best thing about being little and the fact you are not really held accountable for the little stupid things you do.